tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post880233085739959534..comments2021-06-29T13:58:48.182-07:00Comments on Verses Expressed | Gil Camporazo: Momentous Day of Our LifeGil Camporazohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15306950475187476489noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-8636277712884321952013-06-05T02:26:17.980-07:002013-06-05T02:26:17.980-07:00Such a beautiful poem! I really enjoyed reading th...Such a beautiful poem! I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing Sir. :)DiaryniGraciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05232000742689632704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-48948251746643773512013-05-30T19:06:27.497-07:002013-05-30T19:06:27.497-07:00Oh life's momentous day! This is such a beauti...Oh life's momentous day! This is such a beautiful piece :)Algenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06981704943559331451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-25793169572536243212013-05-30T05:48:46.080-07:002013-05-30T05:48:46.080-07:00Wow, another sweet story! You're very good in ...Wow, another sweet story! You're very good in writing a poem! How I wish I were as good as you sir. =)Kim Nieveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13542990846640060290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-33722162196905255722013-05-29T18:44:13.961-07:002013-05-29T18:44:13.961-07:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.papalenghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17149755141923025358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-66770680160195649392013-05-29T18:09:40.050-07:002013-05-29T18:09:40.050-07:00natawa ako sa tsup. heheh.. you really are a great...natawa ako sa tsup. heheh.. you really are a great poet..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02042017848158416971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-8262868624777180542013-05-29T17:49:22.905-07:002013-05-29T17:49:22.905-07:00Awww... that was pretty sweet! Oh, and that boy, w...Awww... that was pretty sweet! Oh, and that boy, was he very swift! (Oh, and it rhymes too! Hehe). That was indeed a lovely poem (despite the fact that they had to skip class). NOnetheless, it had great depth.Budget Biyaherahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16806647899556109077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-84610015487839774612013-05-29T14:40:48.840-07:002013-05-29T14:40:48.840-07:00haha stolen kiss :D so cute - or was it you who st...haha stolen kiss :D so cute - or was it you who stole the kiss? haha nice poem po.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-14948316772354484972013-05-29T12:21:54.597-07:002013-05-29T12:21:54.597-07:00I knew that it was you who stole a kiss form your ...I knew that it was you who stole a kiss form your wife, lol. I enjoyed reading your poem Sir.Lady Patchyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04709008554154801976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-6030784774924432672013-05-29T08:46:36.633-07:002013-05-29T08:46:36.633-07:00You are quite the poet, sir. I can never do this....You are quite the poet, sir. I can never do this. I love how you made something so simple (well, it's SO not simple when you're right in the middle of it) seem so surreal. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08375698416974338142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-7032145012277450612013-05-29T08:16:04.926-07:002013-05-29T08:16:04.926-07:00I can tell that you are a talented person. Seldom ...I can tell that you are a talented person. Seldom I see and know people who still make good poems like you do. I suddenly got into a reminiscing mode back in my high school years where I love reading and constructing poems. :)Edshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14591853398419287727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-43982871524195626672013-05-29T08:05:15.233-07:002013-05-29T08:05:15.233-07:00Thanks Franc... :)Thanks Franc... :)Gil Camporazohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15306950475187476489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-46297620784588734492013-05-29T08:04:45.001-07:002013-05-29T08:04:45.001-07:00This is versed edition of my love story. What I am...This is versed edition of my love story. What I am describing here was my high school life with my high school sweetheart, now my wife. That was in 1970.Gil Camporazohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15306950475187476489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-88321522295731283882013-05-29T08:02:14.149-07:002013-05-29T08:02:14.149-07:00I am also a Sumakwela writer, an Ilonggo writer, o...I am also a Sumakwela writer, an Ilonggo writer, our dialect. If you could understand our dialect, you may visit my site:<br />http://tumandok.wordpress.com/Gil Camporazohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15306950475187476489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-49421688970563633582013-05-29T07:16:25.062-07:002013-05-29T07:16:25.062-07:00I like the ease you tell the story in a poem forma...I like the ease you tell the story in a poem format. The flow is just so natural and the story is really well said about the first kiss.Franchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11228022440726808944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-50197308385263055312013-05-29T06:45:04.961-07:002013-05-29T06:45:04.961-07:00Is this poem dedicated to some person in your life...Is this poem dedicated to some person in your life? I think this post will be better if there are pictures.leighdyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12958508053183596031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-386503761465941442013-05-29T06:41:40.365-07:002013-05-29T06:41:40.365-07:00sch anice poem. :)sch anice poem. :)rejjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08627898709055398339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-28338188107775522122013-05-29T06:32:41.136-07:002013-05-29T06:32:41.136-07:00wow! this is something sweet. I wonder what happen...wow! this is something sweet. I wonder what happened after that first kiss?mommygiayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05707904271591920845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-35474533581794070982013-05-29T06:18:32.487-07:002013-05-29T06:18:32.487-07:00I suck at making poems. But I know how to apprecia...I suck at making poems. But I know how to appreciate one and I like this one. You, sir, reminds me of my literature teacher way back in college. He makes poems like this, only in our local dialect. :)Sarah Aterradohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04109810156553251840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-1707259611964215492013-05-29T05:45:08.483-07:002013-05-29T05:45:08.483-07:00Thanks for sharing. Such a nice poem. I miss writi...Thanks for sharing. Such a nice poem. I miss writing poetry. :)Diannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01833850014918443708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-46280556298954592872013-05-29T05:44:18.840-07:002013-05-29T05:44:18.840-07:00I personally think that it's really hard to co...I personally think that it's really hard to construct a poem. Good job with this. Are you part of any literary guild of some sort? :)dustgaudanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11993632749662802055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-9877560081245390832013-05-29T05:38:09.418-07:002013-05-29T05:38:09.418-07:00Re-reading this poem again. I missed this. Re-reading this poem again. I missed this. markpogihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16126867483258398539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-76122653748100698772013-05-29T04:05:01.602-07:002013-05-29T04:05:01.602-07:00Did you have a course on poetry before? Writing po...Did you have a course on poetry before? Writing poems is like crushing my mind to think about the rhyming words and also the number of words per line.Rochhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01993808802566037151noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-45625290888631529602012-03-06T12:53:01.465-08:002012-03-06T12:53:01.465-08:00You have very beautiful free verse. If I had to ta...You have very beautiful free verse. If I had to take it literally, the characters are very impulsive. :)<br /><br />(Sir Gil, I'm so sorry my comment didn't push through. I remembered commenting. Was going through the comment thread a while ago and saw you mentioned me. Had to check back this post.)athenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13840861033183180031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-6225949362727185712012-03-01T06:27:24.948-08:002012-03-01T06:27:24.948-08:00I like how your observation to others and the surr...I like how your observation to others and the surroundings turned into a great poem .I like the cutting classes line, though I never done it before.Lady Patchyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04709008554154801976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417969752429600693.post-25097597284949438282012-03-01T05:12:57.999-08:002012-03-01T05:12:57.999-08:00I really missed doing poetry. Thanks Sir Gil for s...I really missed doing poetry. Thanks Sir Gil for sharing this ^_^markpogihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16126867483258398539noreply@blogger.com