that I want to play on
With uneasiness I felt
for I missed it.
that I couldn't find it.
Organizing messy things
for orderliness, I've learned from thee.
Avoiding tension and making them
in order for sure.
Reaching out those things
I needed now in place
With a touched of thy tender, loving care hands
I'm contented and satisfied.
Enduring those challenges and trials
that may come and go.
Assured by her who always giving encouragement
for good, better or even for the best.
Nothing, therefore, could compensate
the love and care of this wonderful woman
whom I owe my life, my well-being
and everything.
Zealous as she is
in time she lives
I've enjoyed my existence
for her industry and intelligence.
And out of those past, and present
my life' story so unfolded lengthily;
Surely those things well achieved are appreciated
Owing everything to her.
Lorenza, the precious name of a woman
who brought me here.
A mother so dear and lovely.
So caring and loving.
Now she's gone.
But not forever.
She's still in our hearts
Living with so much love and care.
Nanay Lorenza, happy mother's day.
Nanay Loreng, happy this is your day!
Missed you, Nanay.
Thank you and love you, Nanay!
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Happy Mothers day to your mother and to your wife .The poem is full of love and adoration for your loving mother.
ReplyDeleteYou're a great poet.. heartfelt words overflowing!
ReplyDeleteI salute you nanay, happy mom's day in heaven :)
Belated happy mothers day to your mom!
ReplyDeleteNice poem. Feels like it can be translated into a song. Happy Mom's Day to your mom and wife.
ReplyDeleteMy Mom and Gramma are the worlds best organizers! I think I got that talent from them~
ReplyDeletehappy mothers day to ervyone!! I'm a mother now as well so reading this is too touching and nice ! xx
ReplyDeleteyou have very beautiful thoughts, sir gil.
ReplyDeletewherever our mothers may be, for sure they will be always in our hearts.
You're such a good poet sir. Your nanay will surely be glad hearing these words from you.
ReplyDeletehappy mothers day sa lahat ng mga nanay sa mundo :)
ReplyDeleteA very meaningful poetry there Gil, and i can see your fondness to a very special mom.
ReplyDeleteI know she's happy watching over her family.
Belated happy Mother's Day to all the moms in the world.
You made me cry and now I'm missing my mom :(
ReplyDeletei can feel the poem more with the audio effects.hihi
ReplyDeleteVery heartfelt poem
ReplyDeletewith music playing in the background
make it more special.
It's a very heartfelt poem with a very touching song. A nice, motherly combination. ^_^
ReplyDeleteWOw! That's a lovely poem :) The background music made it more heart-touching! Bravo to you.
ReplyDeleteNice Poem. I'm sure your Nanay is proud of you and extremely touched by your poem.
ReplyDeleteHappy Mother's Day to your mom - wherever she is, she'll surely be happy. Touching tribute for your mom.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem sir Gil, indeed you are so good at this.
ReplyDeleteNice poem. It's touching. I'm sure your mom will be pleased. Happy mother's day to your mom. :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely tribute to a great Mom. So heartfelt piece bro.
ReplyDeleteHappy Mother's day to your wife and your mom Sir Gil. This was another very beautifully written poem, teaching us to give more importance to the mothers in our lives. Great job on this :)
ReplyDeletethis is really a great poem.. especially the 2nd to the last verse...
ReplyDeleteOh a beautiful piece for your nanay. I'm sure she loves you more than anyone else in this world!
ReplyDeleteHappy mothers day to all moms out there. Thanks for sharing your poem Sir Gil! Truly inspiring!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem , a tribute :)) Nice!
ReplyDeleteAwww, tears ran down my face as I read your lovely poem! =')
ReplyDeleteour mothers will forever be in our hearts no matter what happens... great poem that suits a very special person to your heart. Yahweh bless. ralph
ReplyDeleteHappy Mothers Day to your mom. I can only imagine the pain you feel every year that she's not here. I'm about to lose my own mom but I'm hoping she makes it to see another mother's day.
ReplyDeleteA very wonderful message for your mother on this especial day. Very much touching.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful way to express gratitude towards our moms! There really is no greater love ;)
ReplyDeleteHappy Mother's Day to all moms in the world. Very lovely poem you have written.
ReplyDeleteThe love and care of our Mothers can never replace and the song of Nora Aunor's "Mama" etch into my heart. The memories of our mothers are everlasting.
ReplyDeleteAw... thanks for sharing this poem. It is a wonderful message...expressing your love for her...
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautifully written post - Mum's have such a great impact on our lives xx
ReplyDeleteYou are really a great poet,happy mothers day to your mom.
ReplyDeleteWish I could compose a poem like this one for my mom. Even though you mom is gone, it's obvious that her memory lives in your heart. She will always be missed and never forgotten. :)
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ReplyDeleteI am teary-eyed while reading this heartfelt poem of yours. I can help thinking of my mom who passed away March last year. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poetry there.. I'm sure she will know it somehow :)
ReplyDeleteaww, nice poem, beautifully written! wishing all mothers here a very happy mother's day!
ReplyDeletethis is beautifully written. happy mothers day to her
ReplyDeleteThis is very sweet of you, beautiful words. Mothers are one God's sweetest blessings and are instruments of God in giving us one of the greatest gifts: life. Happy Mother's Day to your Mom.
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet poem. As a mum myself, I'd say I'd be proud, if ever one day my kids would write me one like this, where ever I would be looking on. :)
ReplyDeleteYou cannot help but get emotional when we think of our mothers and remember what they went through to give birth to us and raise us. Happy Mother's Day to your mother and to all mothers.
ReplyDeleteNicely written. Im happy and great that my mama is still with us and we have all the time in the world to show how much we appreciate her and love her
ReplyDeleteHappy Mother's Day! This poem is truly touching and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely poem, Happy mothers' day!~ Nicely written. Making mother's day extra special!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written poem with such a lovey words !! I can read it again and again.happy mothers day to all beautiful ladies !
ReplyDeleteI can just imagine how a mother would cry upon hearing or reading this poem. What a lovely poem indeed! Happy mother's day to your Nanay. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is so inspiring, Happy Mother's Day to your mom I'm sure she would have been so proud.
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful and sweet! I know this is already a little late... But let's always show our mothers how special and loved they are. :) Although we celebrate this one day in a year, let's show them how much we love them every single day.
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