Monday, April 9, 2012

If You Meet My Girlfriend*


by Gil Camporazo

Juliet Ajaab
Juliet Ajaab
If you meet my girlfriend tell her I tried
I had to tell her a lie for a reason
Every time I hurt her within me died too
So please, if you meet her tell her
I'm still longing for her.

If you meet my girlfriend tell her I've suffered too
It was always about her, always deep inside me I love her
I've caused so much pain in her heart
and it terribly made me crazy.
If you meet my girlfriend tell her though I'm a man
I do have to shed tears too.

If you meet my girlfriend tell her that I've to depart ways
Though I'm terribly caring and loving person,
but I'm forced to keep it all alone by myself
Even though I want to stay, my heart knows I have to move on
If you meet my girlfriend please tell her I've a dreaded disease!
But I'm still waiting for her in heaven.

*a response to Juliet Ajaab's poem, "If You Meet My Boyfriend"

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20 comments:

  1. AzediApril 9, 2012 at 11:34 AM

    awwww i like it!

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  2. tessApril 10, 2012 at 9:50 PM

    what a sweet poem!but it makes me feel sad at the last paragraph.

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    1. Gil CamporazoApril 10, 2012 at 10:18 PM

      Sorry to hear this... But it just only an expression and reflection of one's emotion.

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  3. Gemma|My DailiesApril 10, 2012 at 9:59 PM

    funny, sweet and sad... If I meet your girlfriend, I'll tell her the truth...
    You're one great poet Sir!:)

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  4. Budget BiyaheraApril 11, 2012 at 12:58 AM

    The poem was sad yet very heartwarming. Not the best of ways to die though, knowing that you'll be leaving someone you love dearly behind. But it's a fact of life.

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  5. maritel (merlmd)April 11, 2012 at 2:09 AM

    poignant, Sir Gil :) did not know you were a romantic!

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  6. BlancaApril 11, 2012 at 7:21 AM

    Awww, I'm a sucker for bitter sweet love poems. Another masterpiece from you Sir Gil.:)

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  7. IreneApril 11, 2012 at 8:20 AM

    Aww Sir Gil, what a sweet and heartwarming poem!

    "If you meet my girlfriend please tell her I've a dreaded disease!
    But I'm still waiting for her in heaven." - This is my favorite line!

    God bless! :-)

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  8. Blair VillanuevaApril 11, 2012 at 8:23 AM

    sincerely touched my heart

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  9. mary janeApril 11, 2012 at 8:57 AM

    wow! that is totally deep and romantic for girls!! good job po! xx

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  10. athenaApril 11, 2012 at 9:30 AM

    this would absolutely be lovelier if this were turned to a song, sir gil. :)

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  11. unsugarcoatedreviews.comApril 11, 2012 at 9:54 AM

    sad but sweet. it felt like a song.

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  12. enzoApril 11, 2012 at 11:57 AM

    Sad but beautiful. I love the choice of words Sir Gil. In poetry and in feature articles...I am your admirer.

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    1. Gil CamporazoApril 11, 2012 at 3:58 PM

      Thanks, enzo. I'm also one of your admirers and followers of your blog.

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  13. Lena KovadloJune 29, 2021 at 1:58 PM

    An emotional write.

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