Crucial Life
by Gil CamporazoInfirm emotion that leads me to the world of woe,
To the sea of loneliness and unhappiness,
To the arena of fiery, arduous rivalry,
And to the cursing place of Golgotha.
Blessed to the mind; polluted to the eyes;
The memoirs that had been left
Like an astronomical grains of sand
That spread along the splashing seashore
Were iniquities.
Nature, however, helps --
Like the whizzing breeze of summer,
That allures my willing heart
To pursue my sailing toward the undiscovered world,
Is gone forevermore.
It is gone to last the barrier of veracity
That impedes my sailing aim
To succeed in my trying attempts
And to be calm in my distressing situation
That echoes to my state of pensiveness.
Like the beaming moon of October
That alludes me in times of query,
That annoys me in times of solitude,
That intoxicates me in soberness,
Is now leading me to a righteous path of eternity.
keep it up, sir! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the encouragement, Athena. Yes, I will. For your information, before I became a serious writer, I started in poem writing when I was a grade 5 pupil in the elementary sometime in 1965.
DeleteSOON MY FRIEND...
Deletewhen fluid thouGhts of passion
fill up the crannies of my brain
when infant poems announce their birth
in a heart newly vacated of paIn
i wilL pen you some lines of ascendant joy
i will create again a new record of hope
if only to show the body politic that we do not fear
to voice once more the clamor for change
SOON MY FRIEND...
Thanks friend, Filoteo for penning such thoughts on SOON MY FRIEND... :)
Delete... harvest moon
Deletethe sea is placid tonight
iligan bay lies still as lake lanao at noon
and i in my airy room lay disturbed sleepless
longing for the absent february moon
ahh that magical moonlight
of a romance-filled night
when hearts were young
and troth was sprung
of pristine love
unmindful of
the twists of fate
the lashings of hate
that would separate
the moneyed you
from impoverished me
on later years of
our warped destiny.
o harvest moon
you and the talisay tree
down by that pebbled shore
bore witness to inchoate consummation
of first time hearts becoming one.
and i never knew never saw
the replica of me and you
imprint on a flesh that has grown
some thirty distant suns ago.
the sea is calm tonight
and as i lay me down on this hovel by the bay
i will hoard again my tearless aches
and think of you and my namesake a thousand miles away
beloved...
filoteo mendaza aguillon 11:22pm o2/21/12
That's a nice poem sir :)
ReplyDeleteNice poem sir!! keep on writing!! Goodluck on your new blog.. ;)
ReplyDeleteInteresting poem! Just keep going po.
ReplyDeleteWow. This is a lovely poem, sir. I love the 3rd stanza. You have a way with words, sir Gil. :)
ReplyDeleteyou're a gifted writer sir! thanks for sharing! keep it coming!!!
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