E U N I C E
by Gil CamporazoA passing scene though
I took no notice of you
-- bit the very first time I met you.
Now the time had come:
You'd touched my life, my patient soul perturbed.
I didn't know why?
Nil covert I acted mysteriously - incongruously!
Forgetting you, the best, I thought.
Shunning you perhaps could alleviate my vague feelings on you.
All to no avail -- all in vain;
Awe! more reminiscences I'd on you.
What a hodgepodge - in my pensive mode.
Life them seems uneasy and dreary.
Love makes or unmakes it so.
You painted it with indelible inspiration's hue.
Eunice, verily, who are you, anyway?
Resisting you -- I couldn't do.
Thus, a melancholic experience - a couple of tears I shed.
A great mystery you are -- I name you.
For no words could ever define and describe you.
Why I like you! My heart throbs ambiguously.
Hallelujah! Thanks He created you!
wow such nice words and expresisions!! very well said! nice reading something like this atleast once a day! very refreshing! xx
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely piece about love. How I wish my significant other would create something as beautiful, and as heartfelt as this.
ReplyDelete:) nice poem
ReplyDeleteLoved it.
ReplyDeletewhat a lovely poem, sir. Who is Eunice anyway? ^^
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I really wanted to understand the whole poem so I Googled the unfamiliar words. haha.
Sir, you are so much good in playing with the words. :)
ReplyDeleteSame question. Who is Eunice? <3
ReplyDeleteHow I wish I have the same talent that you have :) Ang ganda ng piece na 'tO!
ReplyDeleteYour writing never fails to inspire me to write again. ^_^
ReplyDeleteGrabe na toh sir Gil! Talagang to the fifth level galeng mo sa pag gawa ng poem!
ReplyDeleteI love how you express your thoughts lagi ... very simple and nice.
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