Wednesday, February 22, 2012

E U N I C E


by Gil Camporazo

A passing scene though
I took no notice of you
-- bit the very first time I met you.

Now the time had come:
You'd touched my life, my patient soul perturbed.
I didn't know why?

Nil covert I acted mysteriously - incongruously!
Forgetting you, the best, I thought.
Shunning you perhaps could alleviate my vague feelings on you.

All to no avail -- all in vain;
Awe! more reminiscences I'd on you.
What a hodgepodge - in my pensive mode.

Life them seems uneasy and dreary.
Love makes or unmakes it so.
You painted it with indelible inspiration's hue.

Eunice, verily, who are you, anyway?
Resisting you -- I couldn't do.
Thus, a melancholic experience - a couple of tears I shed.

A great mystery you are -- I name you.
For no words could ever define and describe you.
Why I like you! My heart throbs ambiguously.

Hallelujah! Thanks He created you!

11 comments:

  1. wow such nice words and expresisions!! very well said! nice reading something like this atleast once a day! very refreshing! xx

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  2. Such a lovely piece about love. How I wish my significant other would create something as beautiful, and as heartfelt as this.

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  3. what a lovely poem, sir. Who is Eunice anyway? ^^

    p.s.
    I really wanted to understand the whole poem so I Googled the unfamiliar words. haha.

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  4. Sir, you are so much good in playing with the words. :)

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  5. How I wish I have the same talent that you have :) Ang ganda ng piece na 'tO!

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  6. Your writing never fails to inspire me to write again. ^_^

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  7. Grabe na toh sir Gil! Talagang to the fifth level galeng mo sa pag gawa ng poem!

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  8. I love how you express your thoughts lagi ... very simple and nice.

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